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Juan Tello Fix your grammar and be more specific add a few more details overall very good essay good topic Stephanie Escamilla Fix up your essay get your ideas gathered together i liked your topic try not to skip from topic to topic Nicole McIntyre your essay is good just need to re-read it again. make sure you note where you got your quotes from and explain them a bit more.

 