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With the progress being made in technology, it becomes easier for the average man to move faster and produce quantifying and quality work. __Newer technology is constantly being introduced to eliminate the hassle of waiting for a job to be completed.__ Though the ** advancements in technology ** can induce benefits it also poses as a cause to sloth; developing too much dependence on technology. __ Body paragraph 1: __ Topic sentence- The efficiency in computer software makes a job easier because no longer does work have to be done by hand, it can be completed by computers. Quotes: 1. Unlike earlier robotic fish, which needed remote controls, they will be able to navigate independently without any human interaction. ([]) 2. A formal complaint about Google's Street View has been sent to the Information Commissioner (ICO).Drawn up by lobby group Privacy International (PI), it cites more than 200 reports from members of the public identifiable via the service. ([|http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/technology/7959362.stm)] Transitional sentence- The devices offered by manufactures service the public in various ways, technology is consistently being improved to ensure the need for comfort. __ Body paragraph 2: __ Topic sentence-The continuing evolution and production of the Smartphone decreases the amount of devices to be carried by the owner of various gadgets. Quotes: 1. Smart phones are getting so smart that they're now outwitting other consumer-electronics devices. ([|http://online.wsj.com/article/SB123785343579319803.html?mod=article-outset-box)] 2. "Why would you want to carry around so many devices? I have everything I need in one device," Mr. Vargas says. ([|http://online.wsj.com/article/SB123785343579319803.html?mod=article-outset-box)] 3. Maho i-Land, which is the largest cell-phone-novel site, carries more than a million titles, most of them by amateurs writing under screen handles, and all available for free. ([|http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2008/12/22/081222fa_fact_goodyear)] Transitional sentence- The advancement in technology has made interacting and using devices less of a task. __ Body paragraph 3: __ Topic sentence- Accessibility to networking websites and online communities that offer instant messaging, constricts the time used in communicating face to face, declining the interpersonal relationship between people. 1. The new software is expected to allow employees to make domestic and international calls using regular office telephones, instead of a headset plugged into a personal computer. [|(http://online.wsj.com/article/SB123776338990608661.html)] 2. The key to finding work in this economy is to look beyond job-listings sites like Monster.com; if your search consists mainly of scouring available jobs and sending in your résumé and cover letter, you're on the wrong path. ([]) 3. If you're unemployed, jump on this social network for networkers. ([] Transitional sentence- Being constantly connected to the internet and other sources that allow you to stimulate yourself is being taking in mind when advancing technology. __ Body Paragraph 4: __ Topic sentence- Those who play video games religiously have grown a need for new stimuli, and because they become bored quickly technology is constantly being advanced. > ([]) > ([]) > ([]) __ Conclusion: __ Technology has to keep up with the demand of its users. It becomes necessary to supply the public with newer, advanced technology to keep a sense of comfort.
 * 1) Sensory addiction is an inability to cope with slowness. The addict is constantly in need of new stimuli and becomes quite unsettled until that new stimuli is found.
 * 1) With technology we expect progress and we define progress as making our tasks easier and quicker.
 * 1) However, “as we’ve seen with the history of television and video games, plugged-in sources of stimulation that are awe-inspiring at one time quickly become outdated and boring later on”