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==We use technology in our everyday lives. We use it when we go to places in cars. We also use phones in our everyday life to keep in touch with the people we care about. There are many forms of technology for example medical technology which can help save peoples lives. Something in medical technology are the equipment they use in the surgery rooms.== ==Technology has advanced alot ever since we first heard about it. The Technological advancements have been a great advancement to our world. W e now have cellphones in order to call people and keep in touch with them. Video game consoles in order to keep us entertained. Technology has also saved many lives in the hospitals with patients that have extreme sickness or suffer from diseases. For example you can think of stem cell research. This system can help save many lives such as people who need certain transplants in order to survive. A quote from one of my article states "Groopman met with a researcher named Hans Keirstead, who was figuring out how to use a pre-existing stem-cell line to develop glial cells, which support the spinal cord and nervous system. “We are rapidly falling behind other countries,” Keirstead said”. Some other technological advancements include cell phones which have helped us call people and in case of an emergency. W e have many cell phones being released everyday but all with the same service just different styles. So are we wasting money for the style and luxury or are we just being overthrown. Cell phones aren't that bad but cost a lot of money because of the plan service .== ==Therefore cell phones are a big help in the way they allow you to call people but at what price are you able to stay in contact with people. S ome other great inventions are the cars. Cars allow you to go to places faster than if you were walking or riding a bike. One negative impact on cars is they produce dangerous fumes for the environment. Therefore our technology is trying to advance in order to stop our envioroment from being hurt. We also have a "Revolutionary ' phone as stated by A pple. They call it the iphone. Some people don't think that this phone is Revolutionary even though <span style="color: rgb(0, 128, 0);">I think diffrently but this is a quote from my article. <span style="color: rgb(0, 128, 0);">I t states “The iPhone's style and user interface are pathbreaking, and (as the iPod proved) aesthetics do matter. But the iPhone is—so far—not a product that will turn any industry inside out”. I think this phone is <span style="color: rgb(0, 128, 0);">revolutionary it has a sleek touch screen. It Also allows you to browse the internet through a wireless connection. It also allows you to use<span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"> bluetooth and stream youtube videos with the click of a button.==

It is a great thing to have technology in order to help us with things we never imagined could be done. I think technology should keep on evolving as time progresses.
Kevin edited my essay through my account. Good essay write something about ipods and music devices. Good start write one more paragraph.

armando- i edited juans essay it is a good essay fix some of your spelling and add a bit more detail Erick-I edited Juan's essay. It's good and gives some good examples of how helpful technology is and how they can also hurt us and our environment. Just needs to fix his grammar.