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Technology

__What can we expect to happen in the future with our technology?__  We need technology in our daily life because of its convenience towards making life easier for people that need to live a stress free life. We need it to help us in our work environment so we can lessen the amount of work that is required. It all gets more equipped continuously with the applications added on the electronic device. Technology also provides a vast amount of people with jobs, but it is for are more experienced with computers.Technically it limits the amount of people that could get some jobs.  it also limits down the number of jobs there is because the computers  technology because it makes it so much easier and much more quicker.

Technology is a huge resource we all need to do things easier and much faster in life. If we did  have the technology we have now, we would be extremely uneducated about things with out the computers help or any other electronics.__"We have two pieces of infrastructure. 1) Charge spots. And they will be everywhere, like parking meters, only instead of taking money from you when you park, they give you electrons. And they will be at home, they’ll be at work, they’ll be at downtown and retail centers. As if you have a magic contract with Chevron or Exxon that every time you stop your car and go away, they fill it up."__ It states that they are trying to change many things regarding how we can use these new inventions that they are making now.  can help us in many ways such as using less gasoline so that the air and the earth could turn out less polluted and it would help the animals and other living things live much longer because of the higher chance of survival since it is much cleaner and less denser then it was before when everyone use gasoline to drive around in their cars also.

We all need many and different types and models of the electronics  ome of them hold much more information then the much more smaller one. Everyday there are new electronic <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);"> so that the world can use it for their everyday life.__"But there is one sort of gizmo that a good majority of people carry with them most of the time: their cellphone. Moreover, you notice when you lose your phone. You have an incentive to get a new one. And there is a network of retail outlets that can actually provide a replacement."__ In the article <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">, it mostly talking about how if someone took your mobile device you can find a way to try to search the phone and you might be able to find out where exactly it is if any took it or if you misplaced it.

A large amount of people around the world have a mobile device with them at all times. It helps them in so many ways such as if they need to talk to someone they would just call them, or also if that person got lost somewhere and they did know anything about the place or location where he was located he could just call the cops and they would come and get him or he could also just call one of his family members so they can come and pick him up, and also letting them know that they are at least still alive and safe. Yet they always complain about how much their phone bill comes out to after each month. __“The true era of cellphone penny-pinching is here,”__

For many people the big trucks or big SUV are good invention for people with a big family so they can fit everyone in it at the same time with out waiting around for the second ride to come and pick them up. That was one of the main and good reason it was invented so that more people can go in and fit comfortably. Yet a huge problem of having a huge car like that is that it consumes a major amount of gas for it to go throughout the day without it being empty.__"If you take the battery component out of our car–which is what we do; we don’t let you buy the battery, we buy the battery–then our cars are on par with gasoline cars. So an SUV will cost roughly the same as an equivalent gas SUV, roughly in the $20,000 range. A sedan will cost roughly the same range. About $20,000."__ <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">

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essay is good just need to explain your quotes and state where you got them from. fixed up your conclusion a bit more, to make it know that it is a conclusion. ~Nicole <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">Your essay is good but need to fix up where your quotes come from and in and essay you never do the ' example: don't is do not . <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">But good job! _fatima

<span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">Your essay was well thought out. The only thing that you needed to look out for was the details. You gave everything in a brief statement. Always think that the reader has no clue of what you are talking about. Give them every bit of information. Other than that check for any grammar mistakes. Re-read what you write to have a clear statement. Ashley Hamilton