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==Immigration takes place in every country. People immigrate to diffrent places looking for better lifes , jobs and education for thier sons and family. Immigrants go to places sometimes illegaly and crossing large bodies of water that might be freezing cold. people sometimes cross borders while pregnant and with sons who might be little or around the age of 14 or 15. People not only starve on the way but sometimes it is all in vain because they can get caught by the immigration police and be sent back to thier country after wasting alot of money.== =="Immigration is the act of leaving one's country to settle in another foreign country. People find it very hard to pull up roots in their native land and move to a strange country. But throughout history, countless millions of people have done so." This quote explains how immigrants who have immigrated to diffrent countries show that it is hard for people to send thier sons to school and finding a job. I also explained this in the introduction and also added how many years and at what age people ussally cross the border. Alot of people i know cross the border looking for better lifes or maybe even to get away from the type of people that can hurt them. Some people not only die in the way across the border but suffer by crossing frezzing rivers and starving along the way. Thier families also suffer if they dont hear from them or have a certain feeling that something might happen to thier son, husband or father. Meanwhile, all that the person crossing can think of is food or making it alife another day.== ==In my theory i believe that immigration should be allowed as long as the immigrant has had no criminal record and that has no intentions of hurting the country he is immigrationg to. For me in my perspective i believe everyone or an ancestor of every person has emigrated to one point or another. A nother example are nomads because people moved around with thier food with no boundries just thinking about thier stomachs and feeding thier families so they can survive and see another meal another day.==

==These are some of my opinons on immigration and how it can help you out to know if you have a reletive who might be thinking of coming to the u.s. Tell them that things are hard in the U.S and to think it over well.==

Armando- good essay expand more on your ideas and add more quotes

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<span style="color: rgb(128, 0, 128);">Bryant: add quotes and expand your essay also fix mistakes