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Great essaybut you could expan on it. I know you have a lot of information. You could explain who were the Greek good and how they came to be so people could explain more about why people were fearful about them. Great Job, but just ajust nad all.

Sixto your essay was good it just needs a little bit more structure. Make more points on greek sports like what were some of the games and how they were played. Also make more clear what are your sentences and what are your quotes. Over all good essay :) Essay good had alot of information stated in it. Good use of quotes i got a bit lost with them tho, like some i didnt know if they were quotes are not, or where they started/ended. Overall essay was good, just need to fix up format. and do you need to add pictures? you should add some. -Nicole