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__Education is very important thats why there shouldn't be any budget cuts on education insted they should add money to the education funds.__ Depending on your education is what kind of job you get for example a person with a collage education will get better job opprutines then a person with just a high school education.

Education is one of the most imporant things because the better educated you are the more susscesfull you will be because if you are better education you know more and so for example if you learned how to add in school then it will be easy for you to add when you have additon problem, but if your not educated and you were never taught how to add it will be more diffcult for you to figure out.Having a good education is very good because it can help you get into a good collage and a good collage can help you get a good job which will make you get a lot of money. And the better the collge the better the job you get.

Education shouldn't get budget cuts because education is what will help america keep on advanceing. Becuase if education gets budget cuts then the schools will have to cut after school programs. Chancellor [|Joel I. Klein] said"they would lead to deep cuts in after-school and weekend programs."([]) ANd some of the students really need after school tutoring and homework help. And the cuts will take alot of money from the school.in the article it says"In announcing the cuts — totaling $405 million" ([]) This will might make teachers lose thier jobs because of the budget cuts on the school.Mr. Klein said" that while there would be no systemwide teacher layoffs, some schools might feel forced to lay off teaching assistants and school aides"([])

The government officals are not sure how the budget cuts will affect the schools yet.Peter McNally said“Until we see the impact building by building, it’s hard to know what will happen,”([]) And cause of the budget cuts schools will have less money to begin with Mr. Klein said. "Those savings will mean that, on average, schools will have 3.8 percent less to spend for the 2009-10 school year. "([]) And will have to cut many programs like after school and sports programs. The Government did do some thing that could help the schools get some more money.Mr. Klein said. "The city also changed its regulations to allow more schools to qualify for the federal funds, spreading the money among nearly 200 schools that were not eligible last year."([])

Education is not good if the schools have high failing rates thats why President Obama wnats to close failing schools and re open them.Obama said " he wants to see 5,000 failing schools close and reopen with new principals and teachers over the next five years"([]) Obama will re open the schools and make them better so they could have higher gradation rates and the money going to those schools won't be a waste.The administration said" it wants to spend $5 billion to facilitate school turnarounds, which could translate to $1 million for every school that is closed and reopened." ([]) The goverment is doing this becuase having a good education is the best thing for America because if kids don't have a good education the counrty will go down because they are the future of the country.In the article it says"Education Secretary Arne Duncan says kids have only one shot at a good education. He told the Associated Press on Monday that chronically<span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"> underperforming schools need a new start." ([])

Education is the most <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">imporatant thing <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">becuase it helps you out in life, because the more educates you are in something the less diffcult it will be for you to solve <span style="color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">probelms in that subject, for example if your well educated in math it will be easier for you then a person that doesn't know math. With out education many of the worlds technology wouldn't be around.

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